Monday, February 8, 2010

Bop It




With this piece, I'm trying to be just totaly silly and playful. Just let everything go and just have plain good old fashion fun. kind of like a, "screw it, i dont care about you or your dead horse. I'm going to go dance" moment...

I know that sounds weir. But hey, that's creativity for you. Let me know what you think.
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  1. Stephanie RowdenFebruary 9, 2010 at 2:43 PM

    Nathan,
    Silly and playful and even weird is fine.

    Now really go for it.

    I'd aim to trim it down to 45 seconds max. Time for the editing scalpel! Otherwise you're losing us...

    The vocal delivery in the beginning is great (makes me think of Tom Waits), and then you're too way far away from the mic and wandering annoyingly from side to side. Also, you've got too much mic handling noise in there.

    What else can you do sonically to make this vignette come to life?

    Keep going!

    (...My favorite is 'schmear it....')

    -stephanie

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